2006-05-25

Design proposal


Jan and his friend sent that one in. Looks professional! But in my eyes a little too feminine. Would be great for a cosmetic brand. But I like the illustration, looks somehow "stylish".

The Name is just a placeholder and can be replaced by any other name.

Thanks guys for your efforts!

3 Comments:

Anonymous said...

It is terrible .... In my opinion, it has nothing to do with a drink, and nothing that makes people want to buy it. It was never said who you target audience will be. Young, old, middle? From what I have seen I would say that you are trying to get the middle to old class with the names and designs you like. I dont know if that would be the BUYING class. Again, imo I would definitely go with something that catches ones eye in a store and tells him/her to take it and then buy it but so far none of these seem to be doing that. The THANKS design is nice but IT LOOKS JUST LIKE "SUNBURSTS" design....one that is being used over and over. I think you should step out of the box and give yourself a little nudge to do something a little more hip..... =)

just my 2 cents......

9:53 PM  
Anonymous said...

to you ^... make it better!

10:36 PM  
Anonymous said...

The point being is that even if someone made it look more hip and energetic (including the name) I doubt that it is what he wants. That was my point. If you are the one who deisgned this label.... then do NOT be offended, it is just my opinion that it does not work / fit for this concept..... maybe for a SHIRT ...

12:29 AM  

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